Techno, suggestions? criticism?

Hi everybody. It's been a really long time since I've logged in here, so I doubt I'll be remembered by anybody. That being said, I should probably re-introduce myself. My name is Niko (male), and I'm an 18y.o. high school senior in california. I've been composing since I was 13, generally in the genre of cinematic and contemporary classical music.

The reason I'm posting all this here is because I recently started writing some electronic dance music, and I want to get the opinions of people who actually know what they're talking about music-wise.

Anyway. Here's a link to what I wrote. Feel free to bash it, or dance to it, or whatever.

Viral Culture - ReverbNation

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I've been working off of the instruments that came installed with my DAW, so the actual synth sounds are not quite what I'd like them to be. Any suggestions as to what soft-synths would sound good? I don't know if anybody is really into mainstream electronic music, but if you are, don't hesitate to email me or chat with me. xzzap@yahoo.com AIM: Frangiblenut

I thought it was quite good! my brother is into making electronic music, so i am used to it. The drum set sounds were a shock! However, i think the bass needs to be fullened up a bit- especially the drum! You can tell you used to write classical stuff; it has all the melodic and harmonic elements!!! Not too sure about the glass harmonica sound though....! maybe doubling the acid-y synth part an octave lower would be nice. A good job though!!! i am dancing right now!