String Quintet arrangement

Greetings, all fellow musicians!

I'm new to this site, and thought it'd be appropriate to immediately submit a work as a means for me to learn: what to expect, what to post, and whatever else.

The following link is a small, short arrangement I've done of the Zelda III: castle theme (Koji Kondo copyright Nintendo; arr. Jay Tennant.) It is mp3. (Are mp3's discouraged?)

http://www.desertcolossus.com/media/Zelda%...e_Castle_sq.mp3

(As a side note, I keep thinking about Sherlock Holmes whenever I hear this. Anybody else?)

This is the only piece of music I've posted online, and it is not representative of my full compositional skills (rather, just a little arranging.) Yet, if possible, I'd love to see this work torn apart by critics. Not that I enjoy that, but I've never received any constructive criticism before, and I sorely need it. I will post more contributions later (solo piano or full orchestra done in late classical, romantic, and impressionistic.)

I look forward to either criticism as to the work, or instruction/recommendation as to posting, or both. In any case, thanks for listening!

Good health to all!

-Hieran Del