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"Frigus Mane"(Winter Morning)

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This song I wrote for a five point choir.

Soprano

Alto

Tenor

Bari

Bass

I haven't really done any effort on words yet but i'm sure i'll finish it.

I can't listen to it, but the tenor part is really rangey. Unless you're writing for exceptional professionals or are intentionally going for falsetto, I'd do something about the high the A at 13 and the 8th note phrase with the B (:O) at 15.

Ooo, I like the sound of this. The chord progression and everything is awesome, but like Meiser said, that tenor part can get a bit crazy.

Either way, fantastic work. I'd like to see what ideas you have for the text when you're finished with that.

... the tenor part is really rangey.

It is a little rangy, but P.J. also pointed out that it could be done with falsetto. Given that you have the men's voices at a quieter dynamic at that point, singing in such a way could very appropriately soften the colour. If that's not what you were intending, then you should change it.

There are some cool harmonies throughout (the one that really struck me was the [V] in m. 8 going to the [iii] in m. 9). I think individual parts move kind of awkwardly sometimes. It makes for a bit more interesting rehearsals, but it doesn't really fit into the semi-traditional sound you have. Maybe voice some things a little differently?

I can't really give a full review until I see the words along with it, but what you have musically seems to work okay. Get it finished!

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