Help me edit my pieces!

Hey, if you've gotten this far, let me ask you something. Will you not take a few minutes from your life to hear one of my songs? If you'd like, my website is MySpace.com - Direction Unknown - RICHLAND, Washington - Experimental - www.myspace.com/directionunknownband

Please, listen to one for me and tell me what you think. I will upload more soon.

requiem for autumn- I like this piece, however the whole speaker to speaker thingy, i forget what it's called, get's a bit distracting.... whoa i'm gettin a bit dizzy right now...

the staccato-like chords at the end of some of the prases are a bit abrupt. you could easily solve this by hitting them a bit softer and holding them through a bit more, and adding in some rubato.

void forgotten- i'm not sure what instrument you're aiming for with the melodic line, but i would recommend changing it, at least for the recording. the piano sounds so nice, and then WHAM! computer generation. also was a bit short.

generia- very nice. very smooth and flowing. i like this one a lot. if you don't mind, i'd like a copy of this and would like to an arrangement of it. please pm me and we'll work something out =D

each little section seemed as though it was a different piece. I actually thought the piece was over after the first moment of total silence! maybe put something in between each section and lengthen the second part. =)

always- once again, very smooth, very nice. now assuming this was a computer, i understand some of the abrupt cutoffs, etc. if it was not (because quite frankly, this piano sounds real!) then i would suggest making everything flow a little more. also was a bit short. i think this piece could easily have been extended.

pm me about the generia piece