January 3, 200917 yr This is pretty much the same version. Please take the time to look at it and give me some feedback. All though it may seem like I didn't spend any time on it or there isn't any melody I argue that I did and there is. This piece was written for a violinst friend, but I haven't shown it to her yet and need to know if it's complete crap or not. Basically this piece came about after my friend and I were improvising at the piano for awhile. Thanks. Obscurus.MUS Finale PrintMusic 2008 - [Obscurus].pdf
January 6, 200917 yr Please stop posting threads for the exact same piece. 'Tis annoying. If you're going to post updates then please do so all on the same thread.
January 9, 200917 yr I think that you have some fine ideas and the piece has decent movement. However, it is pretty boring alone in my opinion. The piece is really quite simple for a solo. If you were to write an accompaniment..perhaps for piano, it would be much more complete in my opinion.
