March 16, 200620 yr I've yet to think of a title.... This is the first thing I've composed in a while. I've just been rather uninspired. I don't really like where I'm going with it, I've started copying and pasting, and I'm afraid I'm going to end up trashing it. Any help would be greatly appreciated. I'm going to bed... maybe something will come to me in a dream :D march15_.sib march15_.mid
March 17, 200620 yr Hmm, what about it are you not satisfied with? If it helps, let me give my advice. It opened out nice, slow and peaceful. But, about half-way through the piece, it started to sound, well, too heavy. A little jagged also, but this piece can go somewhere.
March 17, 200620 yr Author Hi! Thanks for the comments! I agree with you about that section. I do want it too feel more intense there, but I suppose it is too much. I've tried to tone that section down a little, but it still needs some more work. I've made a lot of progress. (I'm I slow composer). Now I'm going to start on a slow, middle part. http://h1.ripway.com/valkir/march15_.mp3 march15_.mid
