Two of my bands songs

Hey all, here are a couple of my band's songs. I'm the primary composer for both pieces, so crit em to hell. NITPICK! POINT OUT ANY LITTLE THING that does not sound good to you, that doesnt sit right, or that sounds unprofessional (although Im aware of a couple slightly rough spots in these recordings).

http://couchfiend.rpgforum.org/uploads/Sil...mergency+v6.mp3

http://couchfiend.rpgforum.org/uploads/Sil...ast+Goodbye.mp3

Thanks all. I'm gonna come back on here and listen to/crit a few of you guys pieces later on tonight.

I love your piece man...

there was a place where you repeated the M7 chord like two times

but the rest was quite appealing and easy to listen to.

It brought 'to' me 'me' peace thanks for sharing...

oh am loving it.

greetings

:') cries

pst. u reminded me of the old band I used to play with.

:') cries again.

whoa, some nice things in the pieces, yes ..reminds me of my bands gr. 9 and 10, well, im in gr 12 but...good old times... anyway, good stuff going on in your pieces. Keep it up and you will be at the top of the mountain in no time! keep the coming Josh! :shifty:

thanks for sharing

-James-

You know, I think you guys are talking about the piece I posted in my other thread ;-).