An Un-named Song

Listen to this please.

Although its not all the way done Its getting close.

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I wrote/composed this song a while back and never posted it.

Please tell me what you think, and also if you can please help me with a name.

Thanks! :)

I just got alot of feedback on the shoutbox I would like to write a permanent thankyou to exanimous here.

You never really have any counterpoint -- everything seems to be in a melody/accompaniment role.

Key change, but I think there's not enough moving to make that as striking as you might want.

The next transition is messy -- it just feels like it was put there as a aplaceholder and never moved.

The next section is solid -- I like the flutes.

The rhythmic horns section doesn't really work for me -- maybe some rhythmic modulation might help.

Hard block chords into another melody? This last section is very busy, and I think that detracts from the heavy melodicism in your writing.

...and then it just stops?