New Piece Completed

Hi, I completed the piece that I had uploaded a few days ago. I have added some harmony and counterpoint, and orchestrated the piece for a woodwind quartet. Any opinions, advice, comments, etc. welcome. Feel free to say whatever you want, even if it is negative. I won't take it personally and I'm just looking for feedback. I'm not a professional composer, and I haven't studied composition in depth, other than some harmony, counterpoint, and orchestration. Also, I still haven't thought of a name for it. Any suggestions?

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I deleted the old file, and put the new one on. I'm still trying to get the score on. Thanks for the help.

well all in all this piece didn't blow me away. It's solidly enough written, although I wish there were a more tangible melodic figure, and the ending was lackluster at best. I in no way wish to sound discouraging, and would love to have more to say, however without a score, it's difficult to asses more complex issues with the piece. maybe this piece isn't an imortal work of the 21st century, but keep on writing.

good but short