Lessons with 06percussion10

Ok. im at loss right now just because this is the first time i have been on since I haven't had internet access and school has started up again so i might be really slow posting my lessons back up here...In my music theory class were going by kind of slow so ill probably end up using what i write here on those assignments too...

ok. I just slightly went over the lesson and tried the canti firmi in C... c4 e4 d4 f4 g4 a4 g4 f4 e4 d4 c4...

Before I start working on the one in D i was wondering if this was right?

This is a good solid cantus firmus. It has a good melodic contour, a definite pitch climax, and it resolves to the fundamental correctly.

g: g a b c d b c a g

d: d f e g a b g a f e d

I know that these arent as good but what do you think?