The Unstoppable

Here is something I'm working on currently, it's supposed to be about a character from a video game... he's an epic medieval master-swordsman... etc...

It's only one minute long, and I'm planning to make it around 2 - 2:30 but I'm curious what do you guys think about it so far.

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I like it. In the beginning, since there is a lot repetition (which is fine), I would suggest having your strings swell. The music definitely has that epic feel. The second part where it's bigger really sounds more regal and feels like it gives the character some sense of duty or honor. Keep up the great work.

I thought the tempo at the beginning could have been a little faster. Maybe add a oboe with the melody in the beginning. Just something to give it a little more sense of movement.

Really like the second melody. Can really imagine it growing bigger throughout the piece into some really majestic brass section.