Generation (lyrics)

Okay, here is a shot at trying to make lyrics. I have no idea if anyone will like them or not. Also, don't comment on the message, only on the quality of the lyrics please.:santa:

(Chorus1)

You the only generation

the future won't thank

your the only generation

that let the greatest superpower tank

We're not gonna blame you for the problems to come

but someone gotta point out where they came from

(Chorus2)

Don't be the genetation

that let's america fall

don't be the generation

that didn't answer the call

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Instrumental Beginging

(Chorus1)

Yeah, we havn't been invaded

or have been destroyed

but that's cause the devil's got new

tools that he's employed

It calls for the killing of morals

and what makes this country great

so know goin' down the same road

that lead to Soddam and Gamorah's fate.

When you pass the torch of liberty on

will they mistake it as a mace?

when it's finally your child's dawn

what kind of world will they face?

Your children can make a diffference

all need is a shot

it won't really help them much

if there already negative in the pot

(Chorus1+2)

I'm tellin you what your children need

they need a promise of the amreican dream.

We don't need hope

we don't need debt

I don't the Chinese to fund everything we get.

(Chorus1+2)

(Repeat melody using Na's like in Crocodile Rock or Centerfold)

Common Guys! :-(

Given that your understanding of politics, history, and society is so fundamentally flawed, I can't separate it from the lyrics.

Also, it'd be nice to see some rhyming of words longer than one syllable.

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