Paragon for string orchestra

Hi everybody, I'm an amateur composer and am new to this forum.

Last month the Netherlands Youth String Orchestra played a short encore composed by me. It's a wild 2+ minute piece I wrote for them. It's called Paragon.

Check it out, feedback is appreciated:

Wundersch

Welcome to YC

It's always nice when you get to have a piece performed live.

This piece has a lot of energy and was enjoyable to listen to regardless of the horrible recording.

In order for a site like this to work, its members need to listen to each others works and then comment in thier threads. I do hope you decide to join in our little community and stick around and not be one of thsoe who only comments in their own threads.You will find that if you do comment in other threads, those members will often return the favor.

Ron

Score please.

I'd rather comment with specifics after I see the score.

"Maestro" Jamnez

I'd like to see a score for this; then I'd analyze it a bit more in depth.

But I like what I hear! Great piece, man. Keep up the good work!