Another piano piece!

Hi, another piano piece for beginner/intermediate learners, see what you think. :P

(sibelius/garritans)

To be honest, i didn't like it too much. You repeat the main motif to many times, and the harmony feels bare. Also, i couldn't hear any memorable melody in this! (I like my melodies).

PS: I adored your first piano piece, i want more stuff like that! :P

point taken! i'll see what i can find and post tomorrow!

I didn't think it was all that bad... it had its moments and had a very unique mood to it. Maybe it could use some revision, but overall it was a good piece of music.

It's simple, though it is a bit too repetitive. The build up near the end is very good though. You might be able to cut some out of the beginning and reach that climax more quickly without losing anything in terms of the dramatic impact.