Vinkovsky (large orchestra)

hello friends,

I wanted to share with you a piece that came to me yesterday night and i finished today. I don't know what influence i had in it but i had many for sure. i wanted to know what you all think of it's rhythmic structure and melody. I'm open to criticism as well:thumbsup:

I hope you all enjoy it!

www.sheriefmusic.com/Vinkovsky.mp3

sherief

I use logic8 with eastwest Gold and vsl

the harmony progression are NEVER change , this will Never work , you have to change the harmony and develop the theme

thanks for listening, i really thought i had alot of change as far as harmony? does it get boring? and what makes it not work?

hello friends,

I wanted to share with you a piece that came to me yesterday night and i finished today.

sherief

I do not know your age, but by the sound of it you must be around 16 or so. A piece is seldom writen and finished in a day ... Composing generally takes time and energy and time, lots of time

Haha I like it! Great. :thumbsup:

I do not know your age, but by the sound of it you must be around 16 or so. A piece is seldom writen and finished in a day ... Composing generally takes time and energy and time, lots of time

thanks for listening. this one did take me less than 10 hours to make. Don't mean to show off but sometimes I'm proud of my self when i finish something as fast as i did with this one. and I'm 25.

Haha I like it! Great. :thumbsup:

Thanks!:)

I like it. I am young myself, so I cannot comment based on experience, but I will comment based on my taste. Some of the progressions became a little repetitive, but I enjoyed the piece overall. Energetic, strong brass lines, which I like a lot. Good for the time it was written in. Keep it up.

This is perfect for incidental music. If done in the background of a movie, the ostinatos would not seem repetitive.

Can you edit your first post and add the libraries you are using and the DAW.

Thanks

Ron

I like it. I am young myself, so I cannot comment based on experience, but I will comment based on my taste. Some of the progressions became a little repetitive, but I enjoyed the piece overall. Energetic, strong brass lines, which I like a lot. Good for the time it was written in. Keep it up.

Thank you. glad it pleased.

This is perfect for incidental music. If done in the background of a movie, the ostinatos would not seem repetitive.

Can you edit your first post and add the libraries you are using and the DAW.

Thanks

Ron

Thank you. i guess i am a film musician after all. i do tend to think in visuals when i make the music.

Sounds folk inspired. Like rolifer I think it makes great soundtrack and it didn't get boring for me. Unlike Beethoven guy though I found the harmonies rather mature and expressive. :)

Sounds folk inspired. Like rolifer I think it makes great soundtrack and it didn't get boring for me. Unlike Beethoven guy though I found the harmonies rather mature and expressive. :)

thank you! yes it is very folk inspired. Russian folk that is..lol

coincidentally does the name have anything to do with tchaikovsky? :P... nice work! i can really imagine this going well with some magical fantasy-style like visuals. I use logic and east west too ^5 xD

coincidentally does the name have anything to do with tchaikovsky? :P... nice work! i can really imagine this going well with some magical fantasy-style like visuals. I use logic and east west too ^5 xD

thanks for listening! and yes the name does:toothygrin: but it also includes another famous russian musician. take a wild guess...lol

I think it was boring to listen to as serious piece. As film music it was good. But the harmonies were constantly like I-I-IV-II6-V (repeated too many times). Except for the end, the last half minute was more interesting. Still a cliche, but a relief after the ostinato.

I would definitely shorten the buildup, add a new theme, and than return the A theme; at least. But a more elaborate structure would be beter...

I think it was boring to listen to as serious piece. As film music it was good. But the harmonies were constantly like I-I-IV-II6-V (repeated too many times). Except for the end, the last half minute was more interesting. Still a cliche, but a relief after the ostinato.

I would definitely shorten the buildup, add a new theme, and than return the A theme; at least. But a more elaborate structure would be beter...

thanks for listening. i understand the repetitiveness of the 4 different chords that i use. i guess i wanted to see if i canget away with it by introducing changes in melody and harmonization of instruments but i guess i didn't. I'll improve in my next one!

thanks again!