Introduction to prelude - Orchestra

Hello!!

Well this would be the beggining of a work (maybe a symphony) that I'm working on... yes, I only have uploaded intros but... just looking for feedback (lol)

So here it is... sorry for the messy score! no divisis or slurs yet!

About the work: Well after the little prelude theme that ends this part of the piece, I will finish the introduction mixing the little motifs of this theme with motifs of the A theme in contrast (sonata allegro form), and then expose the A theme (no yet written on this score) in a fanfare, and then little develop then B and etc.

Score: The extra strings are the divisi staves, don't pay much attention until I've organized the score.

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Again, just looking for some feedback! As always, thanks for all your help!

See ya!

Seb

Finale 2009 - [Partitura Sinfon

Partitura Sinfon

The orchestration is really good. Buenos combinaciones and although the harmony is kind of static until the climax, it's all really very well supported and built up to. I really don't have much else to say besides that you can probably delay that last climax in exchange for ... a melody or idea to slowly take over the music and give it some substance :)

Suerte!

Hola 'mano!

I like how it slowly builds, giving the listener a bit of time to let it flow through them and relish the anticipation of what is going to come. I agree with Mael that the ending climax was a bit sudden, but I really enjoyed it.

Now if only I could compose something good I would be able to comment better :D

Suerte 'mano, cuando acabes esto dime y te doy mas criticas, aunque no soy nada de maestro ;)

The title is all that ?

Sinfonia No.1 Las torres del Fin del Mundo, Para los verdaderos Amigos

or "Para los verdaderos amigos" is the dedication ?

Sounds very good, I'm afraid there is not enough content to make a larger review, ...

just a few details, ...

Change the "Gong" name to "Tam-tam"

I'd put the Alto flute into the Flutes Bracket, maybe the same with the E.Horn, the Bass Clarinet and Contrabassoon, and the Hand Bells below the Glockenspiel...

The single Violin and Cello Staves are solos ? ... add the word "Solo"

The Timpani in the last 2 bars, ... is it glissando with the pedal or are you using 4 timpani ?

Sounds good, please continue :thumbsup:

Thanks for your time SYS65!

Yeah, Its the dedication lol.

I haven't placed any brackets, and I know I have to add "Solo", thanks for the reminder anyways haha.

Didn't know about Gong/Tam-tam name issue, I'll change it as soon as posible! Thanks for that too!

I'm using 4 timpani for tha last two bars.

I'm glad you liked it! I'll upload the first mvt. when it's done.

Seb

yeeh, well, Gong is understandable but Tam-tam is the correct name for that type of gong.

The dedication is a big as the title, that's why I asked that, make it a bit smaller.

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