Till Death Do Us Part

So, I made part of this composition a while back, and until recently I added on to it.

It's my first solo instrument with piano accompaniment so I probably did something wrong.

Though I get weird imagery from this song, like an old frail couple are in a room; the elderly woman is dying on a bed and the husband is next to until she dies. They are poor and live in a small house during the Dustbowl in depressing times but were satisfied and happy as long as they had each other.

Anyways, opinions are welcome here. :thumbsup:

Also, for some strange reason I get an echo whenever I record this on Audacity, anyone know how to get rid of the echos?

Till Death Do Us Part mp3

Till Death Do Us Part pdf

I think this is good, especially the A section- the doublings in the B section doesn't feel as strong to me. Consider altering the rhythms slightly so they don't synchronize, or maybe working in contrary motion a bit.

overall nice work- didn't hear any echo.