September 24, 200916 yr Cool piece. Nice harmonies in the piano. I'm not so fond of the string and vocal synth parts though. Leave them out, just as a piano trio piece this is great.
September 26, 200916 yr Just wanted to come by with another suggestion: For me it sounds like the most important part of those vocal/string sections was the melody line (especially in the string part). Have you considered having this melody played by only one instrument like a sax, for example (making the whole piece a quartett)?