Piano Solo in F# Minor

Another short piece I wrote for piano long ago.

Score (http://www.box.net/shared/88filac12b)

Audio (http://www.box.net/shared/7pkcm6doln)

Another short piece I wrote for piano long ago.

Score (http://www.box.net/shared/88filac12b)

Audio (http://www.box.net/shared/7pkcm6doln)

I liked it. Obviously very minimalist, Glass-ish, right?

I like the themes, but I think it would have worked out better if you had developed them a little more (like you did at the very beginning of the piece). Also I don't know that an exact repetition (starting at mm. 80) is the most effective procedure.

The ending isn't very satisfying, but maybe you could try using the sonority from mm. 26 as a segue into an end?

However, I do like the piece and think it is a great start, keep it up.

-D

Well, I've never had any training on piano whatsoever, I don't know anything about minimalism, I'm not familiar with Glass's work, and the piece isn't truly a song really, just a little thing I came up with on a piano and stuck with. One day I'll turn it into an actual solo some day, but for now I just wanted people's opinions. Unfortunately, I didn't really understand anything you said, so that didn't work out well. :lol: