December 16, 200916 yr daveyflavey, Welcome to YC :) Very very interesting harmonies you have...It was definitely original, though my critique is that it is too short. The beginning was interesting, I was wondering where this was going to take me but it never really developed into anything. I'm not sure if that's what you were aiming for or not. I also recommend posting sheet music for others to follow along. I do not understand serialism, perhaps you could give more information on how you composed the piece? Gamma
May 25, 201015 yr I am also curios. It's something that has to do with the title? Oh, I am always boring about Italian, but... the title should be "Toccata".
May 25, 201015 yr This is very short. I also get the impression that you did not use the dodecaphonic technique all too seriously. Whatever music there is plays in a short burst of the tone row... there is no development, no interest, nothing all to remarkable... try making your pieces longer and more coherent.
