Symphony No. 1 (under construction)

Hi,

I'm writing a symphony as a final assignment for my high school.

Here is the second part of it, globally a ABA form. I'm not totally satisfied yet, I think it needs more development.

Do you guys have suggestions?

Audio (.mp3) and Score (.pdf)

Henk

First version of 2nd part of my first symphony.

Largo - Andante - Allegro - Largo

<a href="http://www.youngcomposers.com/pg/Music/Henk%20Vogel/composition?entry=24618">Symphony No. 1 - II (under construction)</a>

I have to say, I'm quite impressed that this is what it is: A good piece! This is truly a great work. My only critique is that you seem to move from idea to idea. Is this a symphony in 1 movement? A lot of this reminds me of Smetana's Ma Vlast (which happens to be one of my favorite works!) I hope you post us any performance this work receives! Thank you so much for sharing it!

I have to say, I'm quite impressed that this is what it is: A good piece! This is truly a great work. My only critique is that you seem to move from idea to idea. Is this a symphony in 1 movement? A lot of this reminds me of Smetana's Ma Vlast (which happens to be one of my favorite works!) I hope you post us any performance this work receives! Thank you so much for sharing it!

Thank you :)

That's what I meant when I said 'it needs more development'. It's seems more a collage or something, so I'll change some things in it. About a performance, I don't think it will be performed soon. I have no idea how to contact orchestras to record this.

I updated both audio and score file :innocent:

I've been working on my first movement. I use the Sonata Allegro form, as usual. Here are score and pdf:

Symphony No. 1 (under construction)