hey are any of interested

hey i'm an music artist that is doing something new......i using classical music and fusing it with guitar, keyboard, and drums and other effects......

the problem is i have the greatest classical pieces i want for my songs(what i mean is i found them and i using a part of it for the chorus and bridge) the problem is that i need verses.......i really need it its for my senior project of highschool.. i came and thought this site was wonderful.......so do you any of you want help me out with it........i would greatly like that....

thanks,

pyper from blackbox (my band)

I like the idea, but unfortunately it's not really a new idea.

would u like to help me out

But can you be more specific about what help you need? Lyrics? Analysis?

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ok this what mean :happy:

i wrote a song called girlfriend yesterday.....i used Solvieg's Song by Grieg

what i do is find the sheet music and find a peice in there for the chorus and the bridge of the song

i just to have to come up with the verses part.

the link is the chorus and bridge and the chorus again (i did it on my keyboard)

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=5M5QM31V

thanks.......but i need this done.....its going to be my senior project for school

i wasn't going to ask you guys to do just help through it.......like give me ideas, tell me what i'm dong wrong....i'm new at this i just need some guidelines.....i would never cheat

I listened and, you know, I think one problem may be that it's too long for just a chorus - it's a song in its own right (that's how Grieg wrote it anyway). To make it a workable chorus, the verses may need to be quite long. I tried to imagine how a verse might be but can't because Solveg's song is too much on its own. I wondered what the key relationship of a verse should be. A large verse in the relative major with this chorus in the minor? Doesn't seem to sit right.

i already put words to it do you want me to record it with the words to it. i can do that for you guys....

I couldn't download it, but from reading what others are saying, have you considered taking parts of this piece and incorporating it into your song?

You might be able to find the printed music here:

http://icking-music-archive.org/index.html#bycomposer

I like your idea and have thought about doing something similar, but unfortunately I don't know enough about popular music forms.

thanks....would u like help....here is the song just right click the link and save it, it will open you Windows media player and you can listen it.

I used solveigs song for my girlfriend song so what you hear is the chorus then the bridge and the chorus for my song enjoy

http://www.filelodge.com/files/room24/636104/girlfriend.wma

thanks....would u like help....here is the song just right click the link and save it, it will open you Windows media player and you can listen it.

I used solveigs song for my girlfriend song so what you hear is the chorus then the bridge and the chorus for my song enjoy

Well, for what it's worth, I think that melody has lots of potential. No, scratch that, it's actually pretty nice. But I'm not sure I know what you're trying to do with it. I can hear a nice harmonization for it in my head, but it'd be Baroque-sounding and I don't think that's what you're looking for.

Your piano playing could use some polishing--it's at about the same level as mine. But this is a forum for people who write, not play, music! Right?

do you want me to sing the song and add the chorus and bridge parts to the song...then we can figure out what to put for the verse cuz i have the intro already done (intro not verse 1, people always get confuzed with it so i just making sure)

Yeah my piano is alittle rough

do you want me to sing the song and add the chorus and bridge parts to the song...then we can figure out what to put for the verse cuz i have the intro already done (intro not verse 1, people always get confuzed with it so i just making sure)

Yeah my piano is alittle rough

Uh, do you need this like right away or can it wait until, say, Tuesday?

it can wait :P

okay so what are you trying to do again?

well i using a part of solveig's song for thechorus and bridge what i need is the verses

this is what i have

intro

?

chorus

?

chorus

bridge

chorus

chorus

chorus

chorus

OK, so then which part was the one you posted (the one with the piano)?

chorus

bridge

chorus

how about this my friend from new your made this but she's alittle business i wondering how she made it like was is the sheet music for it. i tried to do it but i failed i going use this for one of my song (vivaldi's winter) she said i could use it.

here is the link

http://www.filelodge.com/files/room24/636104/verse1.wma

hey do any of you know how to play vivaldi's winter on the piano

do any of you have sheet music for vivaldi's winter for piano i just wrote a song and i going to use it for the chorus...i have the verse's done

If you want an interesting blend of classical modern rock/pop, try listen to Electric Light Orchestra's first album.

i know my mom loves that group i really like it