April 1, 201016 yr My first official composition.Please, be as critical as possible, as strings are not my primary group. Darkness
April 1, 201016 yr Seeing as though strings aren't your primary group you've done an exceptional job here! Nice use of thematical element here. However, it just seems to be a bit...dry. Put a little "more" into it.
April 1, 201016 yr The string parts are OK, although seeing as you're in a string orchestra setting, you should mark all the double-stops divisi. They're not unplayable, but the violin I's thirds are hard enough. (By that, I mean they're a violinist's NIGHTMARE, along with probably tenths and downbow staccato). Apart from that, you've got pretty repetitive sections. What I would suggest would be to maybe get a theme in there somewhere to give the piece some unity. Pretty fun otherwise. hones:
