April 12, 201016 yr This is my first song that I'll be posting here. It's in C and I hope everyone will like it. Dream
April 12, 201016 yr Is there a score available? This seems to be in the wrong subforum as there's only piano.
April 12, 201016 yr Welcome here. I hope you will enjoy it here! I guess this is a piano piece, with a little cello(?), at least sounds like one. I hear some very basics in structure. which is good. The first theme returns. You could spice it a bit up to variate on your theme, and expand is a bit further I would encourage you to use some counterpoint. Because in the main theme the right hand sounds like an ornamented version of the left. The mid-section lost my interest, thats mainly because of the harmony. I don't think the sequence is working. I liked the opening the most, though