Help me - what shoudl I call this ?

Here's my first composition....made for 2 yrs ago.. it's a sad/emotional cue... it's unnamed - anyone here who can help me ?

Listen here!

;)

hmm.. March for the Missing? reasons, well it's got the snare in the back, has a semi-march type feel, and it sounds like one of those songs where you like see in a movie the part where the guys are just moments from finding themselves home or some'm like that, I dunno, but yeah

Oh, it's SO relaxing. lovely because of its simplicity. Can't you develop it to at least twice the length?

My single comment is that the drum loop is unvarying from beginning to end. A little change here and there might be nice.

But you can compose something like this and not compose a title....wha-a-a-at???.

Call it "Opus 1" or "Dream Softly" or "Summer Eve" or pick a few random words from somewhere based on the numbers of your birthdate.

I would call it "Beyond heaven" :laugh:

I was so astounded by the beauty and simplicity of your song :wub: so I did a little rock ballad remix of the song. Hope you like it! :)

__Beyond_Heaven____Rock_Ballad_Remix_.mid

Oh that was beautiful!! I'm very impressed, nice work! :wub:

I also made this : Listen here :-)

Another version :wub:

Takk for navnet "Beyond heaven", mycket bra ! :wub:

mycket bra !

Oh dear. Is it the underwiring?

:wub:

The inspiration keeps coming so I did an extended remix of your song with a second melody, based on the feeling your melody generates. This remix is in mp3 but I also upload a raw midi containing my new melody, if you want to use it. :) I also got some inspiration from your last version. I heard you changed to C, so I used this change in the end of the remix to give the song a happier ending, Well that

raw_melody___Beyond_Heaven___.mid

Oh thanks a lot! Very good :thumbsup: Quite fun to hear other/different versions of my work;)

Meget bra!

=) ps. Jeg er norsk !

Ja, det tycker jag med! Men än så länge är det bara två personer som villat g

Jeg har hørt igjennom mye av det du har laget, og det er veldig bra - du har jobba skikkelig med låtene !:)

Jeg må si jeg er imponert over din versjon av "Beyond heaven", utrolig bra! Har du mulighet til å legge ut låten i full kvalitet, 192kbps eller mer....? den er bare så bra! Jeg driver en ungdomsklubb og har tenkt å spille den i diskoteket på fredag ;)

Here are two new versions :

Beyond Heaven (Underscore)

Beyond Heaven (Remix)

I did a little modification of the melody from Odenkraft, and slowed it all down.... how do you like that ?

:innocent:

You always end up making film scores of all your songs! :innocent:

I know :innocent: