Fools of the New Skool: My Cyclone

This is the a track I made for my so called "music album."

Fools of the New Skool: My Cyclone

that's very dirty. I like it. sounds like something for an FPS game

Very nice. But I will tell you straight off that a lot of stuff on the drums isn't playable, like those tom and snare rolls you have going over the hi-hat backbeat. A drummer only has two hands. Except for that most of the other aspects of the song are good, you could work on the dynamics and realism more of course.

That's a very good instrumental. I like the bass and drums, they provide really good dynamism. Pads and keyboards good as well. One thing I might suggest is to introduce some more piano somewhere, so that the piano part in the middle isn't the only piano part in the entire piece. To me it sounds a bit awkward if you introduce the piano just for a couple of bars, since piano is very distinctive and in your piece it takes the lead for half a minute. But it isn't a must, much depends on your conception of that piece. Anyway, good job