May 2, 201016 yr Is this meant as an orchestal concert piece or as film/game music. When the first is the case could you please provide us with a score? sounds a little programatic like a middle shosty sym (like 7, 8, 11 or 12) The title puzzeled me a bit. If you want to be the german for "the march" it should be "Der Marsch"
May 5, 201015 yr Author Thanks for the translation! I was using a cheap online translator. And it was sort of intended as film/video game music.
May 5, 201015 yr Well done! After reading what you intended the piece to represent, I can definitely feel moments of one of the Indiana Jones movies running through my mind. Very evocative writing. I found the trombone (I assume) crescendos to be extremely effective. The transition around 0:24 caught me off guard a bit. Both sections work well, but I found that the sudden loss of that bass drone dramatically changed the texture of the piece. Did you consider keeping the drone through that section, just for the sake of continuity? I don't want to impede on your creative mind, I think you did an excellent job, I'm just trying to be as picky as I possible can be. :)
May 5, 201015 yr Pretty good stuff overall!!! I'm very interested in what you used to compose this. There are some really good brass stuff going on. Did you use EWQL?? The orchestration is certainly competent, with lots of nice little touches. In fact, the only major problem I have is the slight synthyness throughout. It's solid stuff, but moments like 1.47 draw the piece back. The only real way to get around this is to be really detailed - it's a key difference between a very good composition and a professional quality one.
