Cybernetic

The follow-up to Black Chasm on my electronic music album. In this piece, I tried experimenting with low-mixed tracks for added texture. The ending may seem unfinished, but it serves as a transition to another song (in G major 5/4).

Cybernetic

Excellent the EQed beat at 0:36, very nice harmony,

I think it needs to restart at 1:41 and then a nice melody appears, .. then you can end but not that way, some easy chord progression would be enough, your current ending is very unappropiate compared with what we heard on the first minute, it really deserves a better ending.

Yeah, maybe I'll go and develop it more later on and get a full version out there. It's just that whenever I find the inspiration for something like this, I can never find the inspiration to finish it.

However, in context (I pieced 23 incomplete song fragments into a continuous 1-hr CD) it doesn't feel so incomplete, because pretty much every song blends into the next.

Very cool! That will be all.

Like a cool summer breeze when returning home with your convertible from a tiring day at the beach, only to get ready for the nightlife that will follow. I sensed an anticipation in this song. Perhaps a more dynamic song will follow this one to satisfy this anticipation. I thoroughly enjoyed this music, you really need to extend the lenght of this track! it is so short to be a track, the lenght is not satisfying. Perhaps introducing a single high pitched piano line could add some direction to it.

The only thing: LENGHT, the rest: GREAT

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