May 21, 201015 yr A short mopey choral piece. Sorry I don't have the score (don't have Sibelius on this computer).Is it ok? I tried to make it clear and expressive but I think it's ended up more stale and plodding. Minor Hymn
May 27, 201015 yr Gorgeous, DJ Fatuus! The only thing that I would suggest is to experiment around with just a tad bit movement within the inner voices. I know that too much movement will detract from the aesthetic you were aiming for, but a little would spice it up and even enhance the sound you wanted!
June 1, 201015 yr Author Thanks, I don't think I will spend much time tweaking (I might make a few notes into anticipations etc.)... I'll just write new things better :]