Planet of Steel

This is the end title track from one of my projects. If you notice - the classic 'Transoformers' theme is presented in the finale, that was intentional.

I tried to develop large scale here. Something like Jeremy Soule's orchestration had been in my mind. My machine went crazy in the end so some details may be incomplete and I'm not really fine with mix but further work is complicated because of technical reasons.

Planet of Steel

i really like the beginning but around :025 it feels somehow empty , i dont know why . good progression of the piece , the arpeggios of the woodwind's sounds good but you should mind that the player will have to breath and the fast arpeggios is very tiring to the player's breath , you should have separated the arpeggios between the instruments in the WW section . ( im not sure that you didnt do that , but as i heard it sounds like its only coming from one instrument .. and you variate with techniques alot . and that keeps the player interested . .good job .

"excuse my english" im not used to speak in english and its around 2 am and ive been studying since 11am ( previous day)hehe

Thanks a lot for your comments. Well, yes I kind of feel that for single flute players that part would be hard to play, but I intended to have like two flutes vs two flutes that would replace each other on the run. Something like that.

This track made my machine completely run out of resources so I couldn't finish work on it properly. I'd do some refines though. I think that first part lacks woodwinds.

Nice composition, despite the fact I personally prefer soundracks with more evident melodies (like you did in intro and the short piece at 2:29).

Not so visual to me, it's quite obscure so I can't see clear coloured images, but there are many themes condensed, so it's a pleasure to listen to, there are no boring parts. Sometimes it seems that it could fit good in a fantasy movie, when it is the evil's turn! :P

But there are many shades, so it's difficult to assign to a single scene, it is like many ideas linked together, following a logical path.

There's nothig to say about realization: sounds, harmonies and orchestration, everything is perfect and very professional.

you've got to put up "Discover".

The beginning sounded a bit too chaotic for my tastes, but that was probably intentional so I won't hold that against you

I thoroughly enjoyed the rest of the piece, and especially like the fact that you don't stay with the same theme for too long.