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This is my first real composition that I had the privilege of working on with the freshman orchestra at my school. However the recording is courtesy of Garritan Personal Orchestra because they played it the best in class than at the concert where I recorded it. I also want to mention that this I originally wrote this in my transcript notebook and entered it into the computer without changing many notes

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I didn't really like the beginning, I couldn't tell what was going on. Once the melody came in though, it started to get good. Also, is this just strings? I can't hear brass or woodwinds at all. Your score doesn't work, at that would really help review, especially the beginning.