May 31, 201016 yr A tune I started a while back. One of my less harmonically adventurous numbers, I had been listening to a lot of minimalism when I wrote this. Rain Circus (listen) <- Just a demo version They won't let you in You have run out of future sins Save your own back They don't want your smile The tents of tears are in Q formation The world's pentamime* The Rain Circus is back in town They're hanging the clowns You trade in your soul Fifteen tickets in the silver bowl* Sacred premieres The mime will only cry Another pin for your sad collection This one really shines The Rain Circus is back in town They're hanging the clowns So, I basically need another prechorus (last two lines of verse), and to fix those two filler lines (*) I threw in there. Any suggestions? Comments? Catharsis? ~Kal
