D-minor scherzo

This is supposed to be the scherzo movt. of a symphony which is in the making. I'd appreciate comments.

It's available at: Scherzo

For my opinion it is so good transcripted. The Orchester works fine with each other. I think it could need more tension. Like film a dramatic curve (sory my english) an introduction, maintheme, height on thension, showdown, and finish. Maby this could be reachable with some brakes, loud parts in wich all orchester plays and low parts as you have in such part (very nice ones)?

This all is ofcourse only a suggestion for a better peace but hey its good anyway. I think a real orchester could play this with more tension than midi ever can.

Esim

This one seems to have slipped into oblivion, so I thought I try to revive it...

:w00t: hey, very fine scherzo! one of the best pieces i have lately listened here! loved the masterly way you've dealt with the tension all along the piece, relaxing here, stressing there, but always holding high the interest with a firm and skilled hand. the textures, harmony, structure's balance and orchestration are just wonderful. a perfectly accomplished piece with a delightful and great substance and - thanks God - no spectacularism at all - just pure, true and VERY good music! my warmest regards! keep up your good job! :P