some violin piece lol!

this piece is a crappy piano composition with a craply played violin part on top lol :D sorry i have not been playing the violin long so im a little rusty! enjoy :D

some violin piece lol!

Contrary to what you had to say about the piece, I enjoyed this. I like the atmosphere/feeling you were able to portray with your chords. It got a little muddled once in a while, and seemed kind of confusing, but then you were able to clear up your notes. Are you able to post a score so we can better analyze this? One comment I do have is that you should try and expand on your use of chords (which I know is easier said than done). Try and use different chords, rather than resorting to the same ones OVER AND OVER. I am trying to work on this myself in my pieces. Overall, I really liked this! 8/10!

Um...When I tried to push the play button, I accidentally pushed the "Fav" button before I'd even heard the piece :blink: Sorry about that :lol:

This piece isn't as bad as you make it sound, thankfully. I thought the chords were pretty, and the playing was decent. I agree with Eliza though: maybe you'll want to try banging on different chords rather than the same ones over and over. It's actually not such a bad thing in this piece, but it gets a bit distracting at times, and the smoothness of the piece would be enhanced, I think, if you changed it. This could easily be accomplished simply by resorting to chord inversions, or varying the chord in some other way you feel is appropriate for the piece. You don't have to overhaul your piece :nod:

Thank you for sharing, this was pretty nice :phones: I'll give it a 9/10, myself :P

I agree with Zach here. The piece isn't that crappy. Although, I wouldn't say this is solo piano music at all (considering you have piano, string synth, and a violin.) I like this though. Thanks for sharing.