Mechanical Birds

this was my first ever piece that i composed! it was something for school, my least favourite, enjoy :D

Mechanical Birds

Mechanical birds: I like the name :lol:

I think the piece could be interpreted as many things, but I rather like this one: the super quick notes could be the myriads working gears, or the birds filling the sky with so many birds you can't see the sun, etc. Also, the "pecking" of the keyboard at about 1:05 or so, and a parts later, was very appropriate for what you were going for, I think. Great job :)

I also like how you freely vary things throughout the piece, going from arpeggios to a more "scherzo" sound.

All in all, I really have no complaints :happy: You really should write down a score somehow and share it with us though! :D

Thanks for sharing this work with us! I'll give it a 10/10 and a fav :thumbsup:

wow thanks!! i called it this because i used it for school and i hade to fit it with a special event and i chose bournemouth air show and iits to represent planes flying around the sky like birds, i like your interpretation wow thank you so much im flattered! lol

the piece is interesting to remind Nordic picture may seem a small ballad

I like your work pretty much. It is certainly desirable that you could post the score some time later. Sincerely, I thinks its a great job. Now, about your play. I think you might improve the articulation of your scales and arpeggios, specially in the right hand. Sometimes they tend to sound somewhat choppy. I think that you have to work in your play a bit, to make it sound loose and clean. Beyond that, if I'm allowed to say so, this is a work that deserves to be written and posted. Excellent work !. <img src="http://network.youngcomposers.com/elgg/ipb/public/style_emoticons/default/smile.gif" alt=":)" />