Sonata no.1 2nd movement

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Sonata no.1 2nd movement

hones: That was a bit of a scathing review Johnbucket! But I must agree. Are you a pianist? It's just the piece is a bit unpianistic and the long octave passages can cause fatigue.

Anyway the theme was good. The variations were a bit tedious at times. But Good. I didn't really know what hit me in the "second movement" section. It felt as if we were leading to a climax we didn't get.

Well done!

I can't really add anything to what John said.

Keep composing!

Not a bad piece but I dont understand were did you get bar 46-49 from? next thing is that the theme is repeated so many times that by bar 97 I was bored, again bar 114-154 more variation is needed, theme in 187 intreasting but again repeated too many times and as johnbucket said more developement is needed!