July 26, 201015 yr I do enjoy! Too many stops though. Also you could probably include a little more rhythmic spice, even in this style you're going for.
July 26, 201015 yr pretty much what last life said. Also, if you're planning on going neo-baroque there needs to be a continuo! . I'll admit, I really dind't like it at first, but as the work progressed it grew on me with it's little subtle changes. My one technical thing I noticed is you have a sharp in the viola part around measure 32 when that should be a flat with how you have it resolving.