Eternal Moonlight

Okay. This is the first new piece I've made in awhile. It's kind of...interesting. Maybe in a good way. I'm not sure. It's kind of unlike I've ever made before.

A special thing I'm concerned about in this piece is monotony. Particularly in the treble clef. So, lemme know what you think about that, especially.

Enjoy. ^_^

(This is probably gonna be for four hands since some parts are impossible to play with just two, I know.)

665___Eternal_Moonlight.mid

Hi Apollo,

this is hard to hear in midi. I think, a human player would make so much dynamics into the monotony wich can improve this piece. My opinion is, that this is too monoton as you said in the treble clef. Why not vary here a bit? You could start as you do now and vary that note till it ends in chords?!! Some part (after beginning only this note is there, quite many measures) not every monoton piece is boring so if you highlight the monotony in this piece, give the brain just something wich repeats permanently. This can be more then one note over such a long time, without changing it. Only an opinion.

Esim

WoW...

the repeating tone was kind of annoying at times but it was still...WOW.

Prettyfull.

Thanks for the feedback, everyone. I appreciate it. ^_^

Maybe I should cut down on the duration for which that D drones on all alone. = \

I'll take it into consideration. :angry: