a scandinavian story (new version)

this is a new version of my song. Hope You like it ;)

a scandinavian story (new version)

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Hi there!!

First of all, this is pretty sweet - I love the flowing mood you've set up, especially the feel you get at 0:52.

I think it's just polishing up you need to do mainly at the moment. For example, there is a rather strange feel at 0:13 (it could stem from at least a chord that doesn't strike true with the overall feel) The violin is a little digital at 1:06 - maybe it'd be worth some extra sequencing?? I also felt that it lost some of it's structure and focus - it kinda drifted on aimlessly for a while, or was that intended?? I too have that problem, when I have a minute of just wandering before moving back to a solid structure/idea of where to go next. The trombone at 4:00 sounds rather far forward in terms of instrument placement - it could be worth bring it back.

Apart from that pretty sweet!! I'd love to see you trying a different style though - this sort of piano riff has become really cliché. I've heard it so often in pieces, that'd it'd be nice to see a different venture ;)