Little Ghosts at Play

Hey I came up with a name :P When you guys say I need to "develop my ideas" more, what exactly do you mean? I'm not sure I know.Again sorry about the bad score. I don't even know how to add instrument names... sorry and I just noticed that two instruments have the incorrect key signature... sorry!

Little Ghosts at Play

Casper! Haha, this song completely gives me the idea of little ghosts playing. It has a somewhat bouncy, yet solemn sound. The excitement of little ghosts is there however the sadness is too. The song is a bit repetitive, I would have liked to see some more variety. However 2:18 or so you do change it up a bit, I'd like to hear still a bit more variety involving the pizzicato strings (I think I spelt it right :/) I think you achieved your goal though, I enjoyed the listen. I think a little more variety would just help it out. Other then that, great job with the piece! I liked it

Thanks! Yeah, I'm still trying to figure out how to vary my music. I think I'm figuring it out. Glad you liked it