Die Kuh (the cow)

Hi there,this is a Lied about a cow (a sad one lol)I don't have a recording yet, but hopefully you'll like it=)It is supposed to be sung by a Tenor.Armin

Die Kuh (the cow)

Well, from just looking at the score, here are my comments. I thought it was very clean and organized, and I liked your overall melody. I thought that the two sections contrasted quite nicely, and your accompaniment really supports your singer well. I thought, though, that the first section repeated a few too many times...and, in my oppinion, it got a little redundant. Could you also provide an English translation for us? I speak some German, but not enough to fully understand your text. I hope you get a recording soon! Nice job!

Thanks for your opinion. I thought about a change in the contrasting middle section in the accompaniment, but I am not quiet sure yet. But this would maybe fix the repetitive-issue?

I don't speak english very well, but I try my best to give a translation:

On the green grass, there is grazing this one: a cow, a cow! It's heart is full of longings and there are swimming tears, From time to time, from time to time.

What it likes it eats with it's mouth, stomachs it and makes muh! and makes muh!

Dreaming and moving it's mouth it looks stupid around, just like you, just like you.

I know this one is a bad translation and it doesn't make sense, but you hopefully got n impression of the poem