Song I don't have a name for

I don't really know, please comment and rate

Song I don't have a name for

Well, the opening is way to long - with the same progression over and over again. I think you could do things there to help maintain the interest that long. Perhaps change up the rhythm or add a melodic idea? When the melody finally came in, I enjoyed it - but it was too short of an idea. The ending, i'm not sure - sounded forced. I think you can polish this up a bit.

Well this is an ok piece there are some good ideas in here just keep writing. Repetition can be used affectively but just repeating the same thing over and over will tire the listener. Try changing things up a bit each time you repeat this will be more engaging for the listener. Also having less repeats would help with this piece. Your introduction section seems unbalanced compared to the rest of the piece. Try expanding the middle section where you have the melody, and shortening the intro. Keep writing your on your way!!