November 14, 201015 yr A piece I composed on Logic Pro on the Mac, using a midi keyboard and various loops already on the system. My main aim when composing it was to produce a piece of music that could be used in the title or end scene of a movie, or as the theme music of a game. Please comment and help me to make it better. :) Thanks It Begins
November 14, 201015 yr hey , welcome to YC , i really like your choir in the beginning , the percussions are pretty good , but i think you should work more on ur bass lines . and it gets a bit repetitive , and it needs more mixing and panning , it feels empty at some moments , i think you should add more reverb , also the violin melody , i think you could have variated with it more , or maybe added more instruments to play it in addition to the violins , but overall the piece is very nice! i like the groove toward the end specially aroun 2:00 , very nice groove hehe , but the piece ends quite abrupt . work on your ending and try to variate more. ! keep it up . also comment on other people works will definitely make them comment on yours
