December 28, 201015 yr i was inspired by the death note music. i wanted to do simular stuff.hope you like it hopless?
January 2, 201115 yr Ahhh... machine gun effect alert! Seriously, the piano is desperate for humanization. Especially in the beginning. I quite like this piece, especially the guitar with that crunchy dist and reverb. Gives a really cool ambient feeling. But I'd say a bit too much reverb on the drums. And is that a compressor on them? If yes, I would advise not to compress the cymbals... at least not as much as the rest of the kit. It gives them a really ugly sound, like clipping. I'm familiar with the death note score, but I was under the impression you would go for something more explosive like the main theme, but this was nice none the less.
January 3, 201115 yr Ok, do you mean hopless as in a beer without any hops? Well that would be a sad beer wouldn't it? Just kidding. I like the timbre of steel guitar and bass with the piano but you have here a sketch. The opening is nice but it seems to thin out unnecessarily and then the transition is too thin. The second part where you lead into a part where the piano digresses and then the guitar comes in with its angular counterpoint is cool. The next transition works better because you referred earlier to a disintegration of some sorts without the piece coming to halt. Nice job going into a sort of a rock tutti. Overall, a good sketch of some very good ideas. You don't have to do much with some of the material but I'd say you have to figure out a form for your piece - is it going to be an AABACoda? ABACAB, where the points of disintegration are between A and C and to A? Is the disintegration of the material ever complete? I hope you get what I am saying.
January 11, 201115 yr Author oh i thought nobody would reply to this thead so i stoped watching it! Phantomoftheopera: thanks for your comment! I know i wanted to create something not so odrinary i thought it would be fitting. But apparently it didnt. So i listed more humanization!^^ And you are right to much reverb going on I`ll fix that in my next song! Yeah. I wanted to do it simular to these, but with more power right from the start http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_uUVX376U4M , because i wanted to keep the listener interested.I know this is not as awesome as the death note songs, so i had to make it more interessting in other areas! I appreciate feedback and that you liked it thx! composerorganist: thx for your comment yes it would be a sad beer...but wtf!?!^^ ok first part to thin, but if you hear it as a mp3 the sound will be more thicker i think but still: make it more ticker! got you maybe you could explain the AABACoda part more i dont know exactly what you mean... still thx for the feeback and awesome that you liked it too!
