March 27, 201115 yr As always, I'd check for chords, seeing if they're appropriate and guitar-like. I think you could have much bigger chords than you have -- it sounds like triads for the most part. Remember the guitar has six strings and all the little tricks you can do can extend the range of those six. Is this one guitarist or two? The drums need to be worked. Something a bit more spanish could be cool. Honestly, i'd say nix them and work a little more with the rhythms in the guitar to create accents and the like. Interesting, though I agree that it might need a stronger ending.
