April 10, 201114 yr Hello :)Some time ago friend of mine asked me to make music to his video. I said yes. Video is Promo Video of his Guild in MMORPG game TERA. I'm new on forum as well in composing so any feedback would be great. :) To compose I used FL Studio. Here is direct link to video with music. Hope you like it :))http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wZjpYkskNyMEnjoy :DMichael Rise
April 10, 201114 yr Welcome to YC, Arch! Cool track! Did you write the music so that it would line up with the scenes in the video or did you write the music separately? Here are some thoughts: at 0:32 when the trumpets come in, add a cymbal crash. It'll be a cooler transition For the snare at 0:50, I would turn take the reverb off it. Everything else in your track doesn't have very much reverb, so I'd take it off and turn it up. From 0:50-1:14. I'd change up the instrumentation in the melody. I'd also divide the melodic line so that doesn't sound like a run-on sentence. Experiment with it. Try taking out the last couple of notes every 4 bars. That way, your melody will have more structure to it and will be easier to listen to. Nice work, Arch! Check out some other composers here on the forum and leave them some comments. They'd love to hear from you. -John
April 10, 201114 yr Author TY John for Your comment.:) Yes I write the music so that it would lined up with scenes, at least I wanted to do so :)) I will try to follow your sugestions and see what happends :D TY very much again :) Michael
