Judgement Day

A piece of music I composed for my GCSEs, written for a film. (Also bear in mind this is a midi file taken straight of Sibelius)

Your in D minor not D flat minor. Is your keyboard or something a bit off? anyway, Sounds good so far.

Thanks. I thought I'd done that wrong.

Welcome to YC, Mr. Joash! Great track.

I like the harmonized melody you present.

Kind of an oriental feel at 1:05. Very cool. I like those ostinatos at 1:41. They create an interesting texture.

Good. I'm glad you got out of that at 2:06. When you keep adding line on top of line, you feel like you have to keep doing that forever. I'm glad you cut it off there.

Great energy at 2:46. Love the piano ostinato you have going at 3:10.

Sweet! Great stuff, Mr. Joash. Lotsa of variety. Strong themes. Very good stuff.

I look forward to hearing more of your stuff! In the meantime, listen to some other compositions and the leave the composers comments; they'll love it.

Peace,

-John

Hm... I wish to hear this in normal way, not midi )

So do I, but I don't have a live orchestra or decent software.

I have a title for this piece, ready? "Ambien (Zolpidem)" because it put me to sleep after about 30 seconds... my face hit the computer keyboard- hard!

Seriously though, what happened to texture, movement or activity? I know that it was an "intro" but that was a SAD intro if you can call it that. I know others have commented on the cheap MIDI sounds, why beat a dead horse? I can't even tell what instruments you were trying for, do you have another sound library. It's so lazy just putting these rambling MIDI pieces up. What happened to thematic development? Form? Oh wait, I'm the "Game & Soundtrack" section, never mind...

Get better sounds.

Add more texture to the intro for movement.

Re-write the entire piece.

I'm very sorry I don't have a spare £400 lying around to pay for a better music software. I guess it's my fault I'm not made of money. Also, if you expect me to build on every single aspect of music in every section then clearly you have a screw loose.

You've also clearly forgotten where you are. This is a site where, ready? NEW composers post their music in order to get advice and constructive criticism. Next time you write a comment, try and be helpful, talk sense and at least have some tact.

hey i think this is good! it's like...you can see everything's obsolete...and. just a lonely man gazing at the remote space around him..

awesome

great title!!

Thnx!