April 23, 201115 yr Written for a friend of mine. It's dissonant and constantly moving with a melody floating on top. Prelude
April 23, 201115 yr First of all some bowing marks (slurs) would be great. I was a bit bored with the fact that there was no definitive hint of where the theme was going to go. I was missing some suspension and excitement which would make me go back over the piece again and again. Well done for being very consistent and not putting a load of ideas in but you could have developed what you had a bit more. I really like some of your harmonics but I must also say that I hate some of them. Nice piece! Good work!
April 24, 201115 yr Author Thanks baarrtek for the criticism! Looking at what you said gave me a fresh pair of ears and I definitely see what you're saying all too well.
