May 5, 201114 yr Beautiful piece. It would be nice to have the score to read along as I listen though. My only critique on the work would be this: I wish this was longer! You have written some wonderful parts here and I think that they warrant some further development and exploration. Part of the fun of listening to a piece like this is to see what kind of journey you, as the composer, can take us on and at the moment it's not a long one. If that mean's abandoning the "only black keys" experiment I say, so be it. This piece has a lot of potential and I think it would be worth your time exploring what you can do with it. Great job!
