May 20, 201115 yr This is my first serious try at writing in a somewhat more classical style. the progression is very weird I think, but I like it Untitled Untitled
June 8, 201115 yr Very moody piece--I agree, the progression is very interesting and I like it, too. It seems to contain a lot of chromatic alterations, which to me make it also sound very Romantic in style. I like mm.17-20 where only Track 4 is playing, because it provides contrast to the more prevalent 4-voice texture. I think a couple more contrasting spots like these in the second half of the piece would better retain the listener's interest. I also like that Track 5 reaches its highest pitch towards the end. I think the conclusion would be strengthened if Track 5 lingered in that register for a little while longer before the piece ends; perhaps the last three chords could be made a bit longer.
